- The main point about my paper that my peers and I agreed on was that I needed to put far more quotations in my paper. My group members told me that while I had a very good paper, it was incredibly lacking in quotes. I have to work on taking quotes from both Gee’s piece and Cuddy’s talk in order to make my paper the best that it can be. I also need to make sure that I can create a good quotation sandwich.
- I also need to make my writing a little more professional in style. My classmates said that the paper I had written seemed to have a discourse that was a little more casual than the paper had called for, and they thought my best course of action would be to use a more formal language than the one I had used before.
- My peers and I both agreed that the way I worked with Cuddy and Gee’s ideas was my strongest part of the paper. They both thought that I was able to get across the points of theirs that I agreed with and the points that I disagreed with.
Chief said this was it
