In my work of literature, I have a lot of areas in which I can improve. I need to be able to relate quotes from the scholarly works on sponsorship that we read. Alexander, Brandt, and Williams all have very well written articles that I have to use as a reference, or else my paper will not be as strong. The first thing that I need to do is reread and make sure there are no errors. If I give it another proofread, it will sound and flow so much better. I also need to try and make better quotation sandwiches. Usually, I try to put a ton of effort into my quotations so that my paper has better evidence.
My introduction paragraph is one of the best paragraphs that I wrote. Despite that, there are definitely a few things that I could work on. For starters, there are a few people that I should introduce better. I should try and introduce Williams, Brandt, and Alexander in more detailed.
